Digging around about Life's situations and events... exploring experiences... with a dash of philosophy thrown in, in addition to thoughts on relationships one comes across in Life.
Beautiful. Short and sweet.
Evil has always been more enticing that Good.I won't compare it with good on any other front, both serve me well. :P
:) Very to the point... i can almost 'feel' the atmosphere u've created here!
Ephemeral I am.Ephemeral are You...But we share a moment, Ephemeral it too...
lovely just lovely...few lines n ur job is done..impressv
Thank you Ajay... @ BA: Ye-eah, sometimes evil does have a certain seductiveness about it... I hope, one day, I can write a poem/article on the seductive quality of darkness and evil. It would be quite interesting, don't you think so?
@ Dee: Thanks... I was trying to put in some more elements but then felt it would spoil the brevity of the poem. So, left it at this... :)@ Gazal: Ooooh, ni-ice! It's fun to read a poem as a comment... :) nice to see you popping in with your comments... Ciao!
@ Vineet: Like I said above to Dee, I would've written more, but it wouldn't have the same impact then. I think this is the shortest poem I've ever written!
A swish..a stroke..loved the line:)
Hi Raksha... nice to have you here... yeah, the swish and the stroke give a good sound effect along with a subtle imagery... don't they?
Nice... Really liked it.. Emits a nice feeling... :)
Hi Mystery Mind :) great to see you here!!! and glad you like it! Cheers :)
Ahhhh..I am reading it at night and the words seem all the more beautiful and apt! Lovelyyyy <3 <3
Hey Megha.. yeah, I can just imagine the setting and mood and effect this poem would have if read at night! :) Glad you like it!!
It's always great to hear from you - drop me your thoughts below! Cheers :)